<div dir="ltr"><div>Hi folks:</div><div><br></div><div>I have submitted the letter, with a small edit from Aden.<br></div><div><br></div><div>Thanks,</div><div>Kevin.<br></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">On Thu, Sep 13, 2018 at 12:25 PM Kevin Smith <<a href="mailto:kevedsmith@gmail.com">kevedsmith@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div>Hi Aden: <br></div><div><br></div><div>Submitted with your change. Thanks!</div><div><br></div><div>Kevin.<br></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">On Thu, Sep 13, 2018 at 8:12 AM Aden Seaman <<a href="mailto:aden@seamanfamily.ca" target="_blank">aden@seamanfamily.ca</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<span style="white-space:pre-wrap;display:block;width:98vw">> Do you see what I did there? Most so-called “majority” governments in
> Canada were not supported by a majority of those that voted. Our
> first-past-the-post system is better at picking “winners” and
> “losers” than creating a legislature that represents our votes, and
> allows a real majority to have a voice.
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Hi Kevin, if you haven't submitted your letter yet, I would suggest
changing the last "and allows" to "which would allow", or some other
slight alteration, as when I read it I'm not totally sure if the
phrase "allows a real majority to have a voice" applies to "Our
first-past-the-post system" or "a legislature that represents our
votes".<br>
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- Aden<br>
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