[fvc-wat-disc] Fair Vote Backgrounder

[Angela Yenssen]

I like Derek's modifications just because they are consistent with the
positive messaging set out by the central campaign (note that Derek and I
both attended workshops at the AGM in Toronto that grilled us in this
messaging which is why we spew it out so easily).  The only problem with
Derek's version is the couple of interjections of the phrase "error!
Hyperlink not valid" interrupting the text.

 

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From: fvc-wat-disc-bounces at listserv.thinkers.org
[mailto:fvc-wat-disc-bounces at listserv.thinkers.org] On Behalf Of Derek Kraan
Sent: June 27, 2007 12:11 AM
To: FVC Waterloo Region Discussion
Subject: Re: [fvc-wat-disc] Fair Vote Backgrounder

 

Hey all,

I edited what Kevin sent out. Maybe you agree with my modifications, maybe
not. Read it over and see :)

Derek

(ps, unfortunately I don't have MS Office, so I can't track changes for easy
comparison) 

2007/6/26, Kevin Smith <kevedsmith at gmail.com>:

Hi folks:

Here's a 1-page backgrounder.  I took info from the Fair Vote website,
made the messaging consistent with their new strategy, and added
the referendum question.

Enjoy,
Kevin.

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